I am a student at Hornby Primary School. I am a year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Thorp. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ki ora Riley Well done you have done a great job of putting the main ideas into a presentation that will interest the reader. I really enjoyed your slideshow. You images and colours on the slides match the mood and content of your writing well too! Ka pai!
Hello Riley.WOW! what a great slide show to read and watch.I like how the pictures you used matched what you wrote about.I also like the great information you included.I didn't realise that they used goldfish in the war.I was wondering what use they could be.I have learned something from your blog.Well done.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Ki ora Riley
ReplyDeleteWell done you have done a great job of putting the main ideas into a presentation that will interest the reader. I really enjoyed your slideshow. You images and colours on the slides match the mood and content of your writing well too! Ka pai!
Hi Ms Clifford.
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Riley
Hello Riley.WOW! what a great slide show to read and watch.I like how the pictures you used matched what you wrote about.I also like the great information you included.I didn't realise that they used goldfish in the war.I was wondering what use they could be.I have learned something from your blog.Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Riley.
ReplyDeleteThis is just a comment to let you know I have had a look at your blog tonight.
I look forward to more of your amazing work.