I am a student at Hornby Primary School. I am a year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Thorp. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I have posted your book RIley. You have some interesting characters. It maybe better to make sure you have time to write the problem and solution, then go back and add detail. You can make a part two to your book sometime to finish the story. I want to know what happens to Dr Hunt.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
I have posted your book RIley. You have some interesting characters. It maybe better to make sure you have time to write the problem and solution, then go back and add detail. You can make a part two to your book sometime to finish the story. I want to know what happens to Dr Hunt.
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