
I am a student at Hornby Primary School. I am a year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Thorp. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, 22 November 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Good afternoon Riley.
ReplyDeleteI think the fiction line is, that you went to Paris.I know this because you haven't talked about going away anywhere.
I have heard that people eat snails.I think people call it escargot.
And Paris is called the City of Lights.
My daughter would love to visit Paris.All she wants to do there is get her photo taken under the Eiffel Tower and then she'd be happy to come home.
How about you,would you like to visit Paris?.
I look forward to hearing from you.