This term we were learning a on how to create a strong narrative. It has to be believable, consistent and descriptive. It also needs to have a strong structure.
Yesterday, we were learning about show not tell. We looked for strong action words but if they were week we hard to changed them. We use a app called thesaurus. Here is a example.
Al gave Miss D coffee.
Here is it changed: Al kindly rewarded Miss D a hot delicious coffee.
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