I am a student at Hornby Primary School. I am a year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Thorp. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Riley.I like the text you have used.It's easy to read and is set out well.Who sings the song 'Fireworks'?.Is it Katy Perry?.I also have a dog.He is a Lhasa Apso,Shih Tzu, Maltese Cross.I guess he looks like a white cuddly teddy bear.What does Jessie look like?I look forward to hearing from you.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
nice job Riley i like but i dont now what you do for fun
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ReplyDeleteHi Riley.I like the text you have used.It's easy to read and is set out well.Who sings the song 'Fireworks'?.Is it Katy Perry?.I also have a dog.He is a Lhasa Apso,Shih Tzu, Maltese Cross.I guess he looks like a white cuddly teddy bear.What does Jessie look like?I look forward to hearing from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley.Just a comment to let you know that I have seen this blog.Have a good day.
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