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Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Brian had often bought things from the market that had turned out to be the most outrageous, disappointing fakes. He had presumed that the magic biscuits would have been exactly the same. How wrong he had been. As the dogs aet the magic biscuits they gorod all the wae to the top of the pin trees. Brian look at the dogs in sapis. He grad the phone. He dild 16625438687910.

I was riding my hoes wild flame again. Mum said “Riley it for you.” i ran for the phone. I said “Hi.” “Hi Im brian. I need your help. My dogs are as big as pin tree.” he said. “What is your address?” I said. “123 wild rood.” he said. “Ok .” i said. I Grabbed my helmet and hoped on my bike.

Deing doing. Brian ran to the door. “Hi.” he said. “Hi.” i said. Brian gave me a box of dog treats. It said romeos dog treats. “Where did you get it.”i said. “Form the dog market.”he said. (at the dog market.) i ran in. a boy 4 years Younger than me ran to me. I Soup shift in to a dragon. I ran to him. I jumped it him. I bitten him and flied away.

3 comments:

  1. It's great to see some writing Riley,
    Imagine if dogs could get as tall as a pine tree! Imagine how much food they would eat!
    I like your imagination. And am pleased that you are using capital letters for peoples names and speech marks.
    Why do you think he thought they would be fakes?
    Well done for your work today. :)

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  2. You have done a great deal of writing Riley,well done.
    I would be like you,and be out riding my horse too if I had a chance.My mum would often call for me and I would be out in the paddock,riding.Sometimes I'd be gone for hours.
    Why didn't you just ride Wild Flame to Brian's house?.

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  3. Hello Riley.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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