kia ora everybody,

Today we're going to share our writing. This term we have been learning about strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable, descriptive and consistent. Today we did sick sentences. At first they were boring and then we change them up to make them exciting. Hair is my sick sentences Anna sat down. Anna touched the mirror. The glass moved. 

Anna sat down on vere cold, concrete, uncomfortable ground. Anna touched the warm, clean mirror. The glass rippled like water. we wrote about a girl named anna. hair is our picture.

Hair is my story.

She had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery, Anna had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from? Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic? A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight glared through the attic windows, the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they hovered in the stuffy air. Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight. Anna propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor. Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass. The mirror Rippled slightly. She fell through. She fell on rainbow grass. Then she realised she was in block star planet season 3 kawaii. She saw someone come up to her. She looked up it persons head. The name said R!ley10). She had black hair with blue at the end. A bubble appeared it said “hi anna15. Are you new to Block Star Planet?”. Annas bubble said “sorry no. what are you staring at?”. Only the sounds of ice skating could be herd. She looked below her wheelchair. The Dwellers have may the rainbow disappear and they're all sucking of the colour extra fast.

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